Although Pasqualin cover a lot I wish he had written more about when the teacher would talk about him right in front of his face. I wanted him to talk about that topic more because I wanted to know how he felt at them moments. I wanted to know did that make him want to learn me to get better, or did it bring him down. It was a time when teachers would do these things to me and it would bring me down.
I can use this feeling by getting more into how I feel when it comes to telling a story, so the readers can understand why I brought up this topic. I want the readers to feel and understand what I am trying to explain.
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