My project i wrote about what good writing is, the follow people i asked was my mom, my friends and my best friend. i explain what i feel good writing is and things my peers feel also. i took ideas from the book like defining words. i feel i am done other than small mistakes. the hard thing about this was trying to make sure i don’t explain way too much but making sure i had enough to complete my work. the easy part was asking my friends and family what they feel good writing is.
When reading your introduction paragraph I notice you have really great ideas about what good writing is. As the reader I notice it was a little confusing with the wording. I also like how you used examples from the book.
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Your formatting is going great, but I was wondering if you meant space things out on purpose? You could either combine things or shorten the space. Your information from your peers are really good.
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I really liked your thought on what good writing is. I love that you said good writing is when a reader wants more.
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Thanks a lot I’ll look forward to checking your paper
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